Let’s consider the story itself, the girl in question sneaks
out of her Pearl City home late one night and meets a friend of hers just up
the street.
They drive out to Makua on the Leeward coast where they join a party just outside of Kaneana Cave that’s already in progress. It turns out that they are the only two females at this impromptu drinking session. As the night progresses, the girl’s friend and one of the other boys make themselves scarce, leaving only the girl with six of the remaining boys. The more the boys drink, the bolder they become until they are finally forcing themselves on the young girl. She makes a run for it and disappears into the black depths of the cave across the street, the boys go after her and when they find her, they rape and murder her.
They drive out to Makua on the Leeward coast where they join a party just outside of Kaneana Cave that’s already in progress. It turns out that they are the only two females at this impromptu drinking session. As the night progresses, the girl’s friend and one of the other boys make themselves scarce, leaving only the girl with six of the remaining boys. The more the boys drink, the bolder they become until they are finally forcing themselves on the young girl. She makes a run for it and disappears into the black depths of the cave across the street, the boys go after her and when they find her, they rape and murder her.
With what you’ve read so far, what song comes to mind? If it’s taking too long for you to
think of something then you’re over thinking, but if a song has automatically
popped into your head then you’ve already let the story come out to you and you
have more than likely felt as if you were IN the story.
For myself, as the story progressed I thought of Stealer’s
Wheel and their offering of Stuck In The Middle With You. In the course of this story, we meet
another main character that has come to the cave to look for solace and peace
away from the troubles of his personal life. Seconds later, he hears the heroine in our story run into
the cave and, through some strange event, he is able to communicate with the
murdered girl through a window in time.
It is plain to him that the girl is in distress and rather than help
her, he decides to leave and not involve himself but, as we all know, it doesn’t
turn out that way.
Therefore, I thought that Stuck In The Middle With You best described
his circumstance.
Well, I don't know why I came here tonight
I got the feeling that something ain't right
I'm so scared in case I fall off my chair
And I'm wondering how I'll get down those stairs
Clowns to left of me
Jokers to the right
Here I am, stuck in the middle with you
Yes, I'm stuck in the middle with you
And I'm wondering what it is I should do
It's so hard to keep this smile from my face
Losing control, yeah I'm all over the place
Clowns to left of me
Jokers to the right
Here I am, stuck in the middle with you
Well, you started off with nothing
And you're proud that you're a self-made man
And your friends they all come crawling
Slap you on the back and say:
"Please!"
"Please!"
Trying to make some sense of it all
But I can see it makes no sense at all
Is it cool to go to sleep on the floor?
'Cuz I don't think that I can take any more
Clowns to left of me
Jokers to the right
Here I am, stuck in the middle with you
Well, you started off with nothing
And you're proud that you're a self-made man
And your family all come crawling
Slap you on the back and say:
"Please!"
"Please!"
Well, I don't know why I came here tonight
I got the feeling that something ain't right
I'm so scared in case I fall off my chair
And I'm wondering how I'll get down those stairs
Clowns to left of me
Jokers to the right
Here I am, stuck in the middle with you
Yes I'm stuck in the middle with you
Stuck in the middle with you
Here I am, stuck in the middle with you...
The chance meeting takes place moments before he witnesses
her murder. At the
conclusion of the story another song came to mind just as I was typing out the
last sentence, which was Allison written by Elvis Costello. However, I managed to attach Linda
Ronstadt’s YouTube video version of the same song from her “Living In The USA”
album. Let’s take a look at the
lyrics:
Oh, it's so funny to be seeing you after so long, girl
And with the way you look, I understand that you were not
impressed
But I heard you let that little friend of mine
Take off your party dress
I'm not gonna get too sentimental
Like those other sticky valentines
'Cause I don't know if you are loving somebody
I only know it isn't mine
Allison, I know this world is killing you
Oh, Allison, my aim is true
Well, I see you've got a husband now
Did he leave your pretty fingers lying in the wedding cake?
You used to hold him right in your hand
But it took all that he could take
Sometimes I wish that I could stop you from talking
When I hear the silly things that you say
I think somebody better put out the big light
'Cause I can't stand to see you this way
Allison, I know this world is killing you
Oh, Allison, my aim is true
My aim is true
Of course, if you Google the name of the song you will find
the meaning or intent behind Costello’s composition. For myself, the lyrics represent the life or circumstances
that the female character in the story would never come to know. Would that life have been a favorable
one, or one of an abusive relationship, which the song describes? Other stories stand on their own
without a song or a picture added on, the words paint a picture and bring you
into the depths of the story and make you feel as if you are right there
witnessing everything as it happens.
Sometimes there are ghost stories that have a hint of
romance in them, but in those few and far in between circumstances there is a
story like “Kaua ‘Elua.” A man
searches for the ghost of his ex-wife in an effort to reconcile one last time
before her spirit moves on.
For me, the perfect song that matched this effort was “Pretty
Face/Jealousy” by Roland Cazimero.
The lyrics describe the playful kind of love the local
couple shared before life interrupted and their marriage went south. The song itself lends a healing
element to the story and seems to cleanse the widower of his self imposed guilt
over his deceased ex-wife.
Pretty face, what’s your name? And is that smile for me?
And am I fortunate enough to have your love?
Pretty face, shining eyes, skin so soft and nice,
could it be
that what we have is right?
Cause in my heart I get excited, and you can see why I can’t
hide it
Cause I’m for you and you’re for me, pretty face
This jealousy, made me blind, this jealousy too late made me
see
Just how much I loved you now that you’re not with me
Pretty face, heart of gold, you’re so good to me
Forever I will be there by your side
Pretty face, call it love
Cause I’m in love with you, thank you for the love you give
to me
To feel your arms no more, to feel your lips no more, I want
to love you
Now that you are gone away from me
Just couldn’t think, just had to do, just didn’t know that I
would hurt you
But hurt you I did, but I’ll hurt you no more
The hurt that I feel, I alone will endure
Oh pretty face, heart of gold; you’re so good to me
Forever I will be there by your side
Pretty face, call it love
Cause I’m in love with you
Thank you for the love you give to me
Cause in my heart I get excited
And you can see why I can’t hide it
I’m for you, you’re for me,
Pretty face
I know that some of you are wondering if there is a ghost
story that requires a song like,
“Mmm Bop?”
Sure, if there’s a story somewhere about a washed up boy band that died
in a plane crash and is perhaps haunting an old recording studio, then a song
like that would be perfect. Who
knows?
In short, music always seems to find the right time to
insert itself in to these compositions while simultaneously knowing when to
stand back. Sure, many of my
stories stand on their own without the aid of a song but for those few that are
accompanied by the strains of a haunting melody, they lend that slight push
that sends the reader over the edge.
For my final offering, I have to take you back in time to a
place where a local waitress works at a roadside eatery right off of Mahukona
road in Kawaihae. At a very young
age, her elder Uncle took her infant son from her late one night, never to be seen
again. She was all of
fourteen years old when this took place, when we meet her in this story; she is
fifty-three and the loss of her child is the cross she bears. You can see it in her demeanor and in
the way she carries herself, it’s become a part of her physical make up, almost
like a beautiful sadness. In the
restaurant where she works is an old jukebox that was brought in by the cook in
order to lend some atmosphere to an otherwise drab location. One afternoon, a young Hawaiian man
walks in to the establishment and orders some food and a drink. Afterwards, he makes his way over to
the jukebox where he inserts a quarter and picks out a song.
Hey mister, that's me up on the jukebox.
I'm the one that's singing this sad song.
Well, I'll cry every time that you slip in one more dime
and let the boy sing the sad song one, one more time.
Southern California, that's as blue as the boy can be,
blue as the deep blue sea, won't you listen to me now.
I need your golden gated cities like a hole in the head,
just like a hole in the head, I'm free.
Hey mister, that's me up on the jukebox. I'm the one that's
singing this sad song.
Well, I'll cry every time that you slip in one more dime
and let the boy sing the sad song one, one more time.
I do believe I'm headed home. Hey mister, can't you see that
I'm as dry as a bone.
I think I'll spend some time alone,
yes, unless you've found a way of squeezing water from a
stone.
Let the doctor and the lawyer do as much as they can.
Let the springtime begin. let the boy become a man.
I done wasted too much time just to sing you this sad song.
I done been this lonesome picker a little too long.
Hey mister, that's me up on the jukebox. I'm the one that's
singing this sad song.
Well, I'll cry every time that you slip in one more dime
and let the boy sing the sad song one, one more time.
I've been spreading myself thin these days, don't you know?
Goodbye.
This composition written by James Taylor has become the
waitress’s them song through out her life if you think about it, but it also
becomes a conversation piece for the young man and the waitress in the scene
that follows. Unfortunately, I
can’t tell you anymore about it because this story is in the process of
becoming a book, so you’ll have to wait and read it for yourself once it hits
the shelves. Apologies.
What we have seen thus far tells us that music in a story
has many facets, many purposes, and many reasons why they figure in nicely with
a ghost story. I’d like to leave
you with one last song; if you read it over carefully, you will more than
likely have second thoughts before you ever weave it into one of your own
stories. This is Timothy sung by
a group known as The Buoys that was released in 1971. This was their one and only hit. As you read the lyrics to this song,
try to figure out what this tune is all about. You’ll be surprised.
Trapped in a mine what had caved in
And everyone knows the only ones left
Were Joe and me and Tim
When they broke through to pull us free
The only ones left to tell the tale
Was Joe and me
Timothy, Timothy, where on earth did you go
Timothy, Timothy, God why don't I know
Hungry as hell, no food to eat
And Joe said that he would sell his soul
For just a piece of meat
Water enough to drink for two
And Joe said to me, I'll take a swig
And then there's some for you
Timothy, Timothy, Joe was looking at you
Timothy, Timothy, God what did we do
I must have blacked out just 'round then
'Cause the very next thing that I could see
Was the light of the day again
My stomach was full as it could be
And nobody ever got around to finding Timothy
Timothy, Timothy where on earth did you go
Timothy, Timothy god why don't I know
Timothyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy Yeah
Timothy
Timothy (fade)
Thanks for reading and pleasant dreams.
Absolutely! During the time when I became absorbed in learning about the Bustamante murder in Kailua from the 1970's, I heard a song by Electric Light Orchestra called "Can't Get you out of my head" it captured perfectly what I was feeling and I always think about that story when I hear it. I came to find out coincidentally that this song peaked top 10 in the charts during the week in March 1975 when Dede was killed. Strange. Here it is: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pi92aKQEwXI&feature=player_detailpage Interesting post and observation. Dominick
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